The Stranger
*FICTION*
Last Saturday, I was at
British council, New Delhi center. I had gone there to collect my certificate.
The receptionist told me that my teacher would arrive in an hour and only then I
could collect my certificate so I went to the Charbagh there to spend my time.
Since all the tables were
occupied (yes there is a good sitting arrangement too), I sat at one of the
slabs surrounding a fountain which is there in the middle of Charbagh. I
assumed it was a pleasant day but the wind was dry and temperature not as low
as I had expected. There were people sitting on the other slabs too. As it was
a dry day, I scooped some water on my palm from the fountain. Freshness
surrounded me so I kept doing it again and again. After a few minutes I
realized a girl was observing me. She was beautiful. I wanted to stare at her
for a few more minutes but I did not want to look like an idiot. So I averted
my eyes and then moved to the area where there is a sculpture.
The sculpture has always
remained a mystery to me. Every time I see it, I find a different meaning
associated to it. This time, I didn’t want to observe it, so instead I removed
my footwears and started walking barefooted on the grass. The smell of moist
earth and the wet grass, It was heavenly. Suddenly I noticed someone was amused
at my Drama. I must have been looking an idiot. It was the same girl who was
sitting at the adjacent slab earlier. I was feeling terrible at my stupidities.
She was tall, must be 5’4”, fair, pretty. And all these things made me wince.
She wore and identity card and was carrying her notebooks and some printed notes.
I felt I had been enough of a fool in front of her so I tried to start a
conversation. I went ahead.
“um..student
no? which course?”
“umm..yeah.
Creative writing”
“Oh!
Me too. I mean I was. Came to collect the certificate. Charbagh story???”
“Oh!
Yeah Charbagh story.” and she smiled.
“same
stuff”
“yeah.
Same stuff” she was still amused.
Now
that we had something in common, we conversed for a few minutes. Then I
realized that My teacher would have come so I told her and left. The way she
was smiling between our conversation and had seen me doing all that, I must
have been looked a joker to her
I
met my teacher, collected the certificate but as I took a step towards the
exit, I felt a strange urge to go back to Charbagh and meet that girl again. In
a hurry I had even forgot to ask her name. As I reached the entrance to
Charbagh, I realized it had started to drizzle. I saw the tiny drops on the
ground which kept falling and vanished. I looked around. She had gone to the
corner where there is greenery. She was looking really pretty in her blue long
skirt and a black blouse. Her cheeks were pink. She was standing besides
colorful flowers. That image is still alive in my mind. I took a deep breath,
but as I took a step forward, something stopped me. I stared her for a while
and then came back.
It’s just that strangers, sometimes, are best left
strangers.
Beautiful. It takes a lot of courage to curb our impulse.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful narration. Sometimes strangers are best left strangers and that's what I do. I travel a lot and I never ask their name, I feel that's mystical and lovely.
ReplyDeleteSG Hey..long time :) thank you. :)
ReplyDeleteSaru Thank U.:) Really?, Interesting !! :-)
Loved the ending! Nice story. I could visualize the setting too. I like that place! :D
ReplyDeleteOne of my frn said, she liked everything but the ending could have been better....hehe
DeleteThank you anyways....this is the beauty of writing...u get to see the diverse perpectives..
Its a nice place indeed :) :)
:) Nice but I wish the end was better...
ReplyDeleteUmm....Now that u r the second one to say that I'll surely think about it :)
DeleteThanks for an honest response :-)
Well written, Priyaa with nice description of rain!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rahul jee :-)
Deletestrangers, sometime best left strangers :) :)
ReplyDeleteLovely one....
Thank you :-)
DeleteWelcome to happy Moments..well mostly!! :-) :-) Keep visiting...
Thoughtful and nice. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, srishti :)
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