This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend , an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda Chosen among the Loved posts!! "Again you are scribbling..Can't you put your nose off your books and papers for sometime?" my mother snaps at me as I scribble a poem. "Oh ma! Atleast listen to what I wrote" "Hmm...tell" "Ahmm ahmm" I pretend to clear my throat and My mum laughs back. "Will you open your mouth or should I go back to kitchen?" "Oh!No-no please!" I say quickly and grab her by elbow. Who doesn't want audience? ;) Listen," Life's unpredictable, Can't say when it would take a turn. We can't really say, When life might be deprived of all fun. It's true, What elders say, You should know to walk alone; No matter Come what may. She smiles and looks at me for some time curiously. "You write well and what you've written is indeed true."...
Strange bedfellows for sure, Priyaa! Lovely writing:) A huge thanks for following my blog:) You made my day!
ReplyDeletethanks....these words made my day too :) !!
DeleteAll the things you haven't done there to haunt you. There's a lesson here for sure. Great response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteStrange bed fellows. brilliant nomenclature. lol
ReplyDeleteNice piece of writing:)
Very beautiful lines Priya..:-)You have a very nice blog..:-)Glad to have met you here..:-)Thanks for the visit and comment..:-)
ReplyDeleteawesome truely awesome.. u earned a fan!!
ReplyDeleteAishwarya: Thank you :-)
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Dr sneha: U made me smile :-) thank you :-)
I love the way your poems end. The structure and your transcription of thoughts are really good. It's like a little tale told in the form of a poem. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem again. Please write more :)
Thanks Usama. your words are so encouraging for me :)
DeleteI will, and share too :-) :-)