Teen-age Blues!!
I am hell of an insomniac…..mere 4 5 days off from the
work, the routine is gone, body clock is disturbed and mind starts
wandering…..However this time, thanks to a shift of room ( yes, my family has finally understood that a 21 yrs old girl is a grown
up and needs a separate room…thank you God J )and this
blog, that sleepless nights are not spent on futile thinking.
Tonight, I just opened an old diary I used to maintain
earlier to write poems (from class 8th to class 12th). I
am smiling at some of the stupid poems I had scribbled, perfectly rhyming and
with no meaning.
No actually it’s not devoid of meaning but somehow the
incidents I remember which had inspired me to write sounds so childish that I
want to laugh.
Any ways here is
the poem.
Teenage Blues!!
Hey! I want a change.
But things have gone
beyond my range
But still I know I
can change it.
And I think I can
face it.
I can do what I feel
like my duty,
What I can do on my part.
But still there is
An aversion to it in
my heart.
I fear if I’ll get a
positive response really.
And it doesn’t mean
they do my say,
Just whatever they
do, Do it whole-Heartedly.
But I fear that
tomorrow will not be like today.
Of course the season
will change,
And the wind might
blow the other way.
And what I feel like
doing today,
Will it be apt for
tomorrow?
Come on God!! Please
say.
Yes. I really expected
God to answer me. :-D
Hello Priyaa,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job, its a lovely poem. I always envy people who could write rhyming poems, they sound so good when read :D
You had one diary from 8th to 12th? wow th iats incredible considering i kept changing diaries every 6 months :P Hehehe
P.S.- Am your first follower :D Yay!!
Hey Swarnali :-)
Deletehuge thanks for following my blog, you are also the 1st person to comment on this poem....I had full faith no body will ever leave a positive word on this ;-)
and I was very Unoganized...I used to write small rhymes on back of notebooks, books etc..I too wish I had lots of diaries..:-)
Ps- I also subscribed to your blog but through email...:-)
Aww this is a lovely poem, my dear. Its not a necessity to follow my blog back, do so only if you like my content. :) And email followers aren't notified to me :P
DeleteAnd the diary part...I kept losing my diaries all the time, so had to get new ones, hehehe :P
My dear,i subscribed right after my 1st visit to ur blog coz i really liked it :-) I didn't just followed back :-) :-)
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